Thursday, 8 May 2014

08.05.14 English Homework

Hi year 4. 
We really need your help. Miss Hutton, Miss Garlick and I have been writing a letter to Mrs Dye about our school trip to London zoo. We need you to check it for us. Can you check that our spelling, punctuation and grammar are correct? Can you check for errors and re-write it below with the corrections.
Thank you Year 4 teachers.

Dear mrs dye
Year 4 would like your permission to go to london zoo on tuesday 20th may 2014 we will be traveling by train from hainault staton and we will walked through regents park to the zoo
we will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spnd time looking around the zoo.
we hop to arrived back at school at 4.30am.
The children will realy enjoy the day adn it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
Thankyou
miss henderson, miss garlick and miss hutton
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13 comments:

  1. Akhil10 May 2014 at 03:28

    Dear Mrs Dye
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th may 2014 we will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walked through Regents park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo.
    We hop to arrived back at school at 4.30 pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thank you
    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton

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  2. Adonis syla10 May 2014 at 06:41

    Dear mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014.
    We will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through regents park zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo.
    We hope to arrive back at school 4.30pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thankyou miss Henderson, miss Garlick and miss hutton.

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  3. AFI10 May 2014 at 08:34

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will be walking through Regents Park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00pm and then spend time looking around the zoo.
    We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic Home Sweet Home.
    Thank you
    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton.

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  4. kemdia10 May 2014 at 12:09

    Dear Mrs dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo.On Tuesday 20th may 2014 . We will be travelling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through regent park to the zoo we will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30pm. The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home
    Thank you
    Miss henderson, Miss garlick, Miss hutton

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  5. Kajus Juocinskas (Y4G)11 May 2014 at 04:16

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo, on Tuesday 20th May 2014, we will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00am and then spend time looking around the zoo.
    We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic - Home sweet home.
    Thank you!
    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton

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  6. Alizay Ali11 May 2014 at 05:13

    Dear Mrs. Dye,

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12:00pm and then spend time looking around the Zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30pm. The children will really enjoy the day and it will help to learn about our topic, Home Sweet Home.

    Thank you,
    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton.

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  7. JEYARANJAN HARRINIE11 May 2014 at 07:23

    Dear Mrs. Dye
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the Zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12.00 pm and then spend time looking around the Zoo.
    We hope to arrive back to school at 4.30 pm.
    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic ‘home sweet home’.
    Thank you.
    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton

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  8. mason11 May 2014 at 07:33

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014 .We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents park to the Zoo . We will eat lunch at 12.00am and then spend time looking around the Zoo .We hope to arrived back at school at 3.30pm.The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home.
    Thank you
    miss Henderson,miss Garlick and miss Hutton.

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  9. SUREKAS ( Y4G)11 May 2014 at 08:58

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014 . We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through regents park to the zoo.
    We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the zoo. We hoped on to the train to arrive back at school at 4:30pm.
    The children will enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home .
    Thank you
    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton

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  10. Cosmina11 May 2014 at 10:00

    Dear Mrs Dye,

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday, 20th May 2014. We will be traveling by train from Hainault station and we will walk through Regents Park to the zoo.

    We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the zoo. We hope to arrive back at school at 4:30pm.

    The children will really enjoy the day and it will help them learn about our topic “Home sweet home”.

    Thank you,

    Miss Henderson, Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton

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  11. Miruna12 May 2014 at 08:21

    Dye with capital lets and spelt rong naes with capitals lets

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  12. teodora 4g12 May 2014 at 09:30

    Dear Mrs Dye,
    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014.We will be traveling by train from Hainault station, we will walk through Regents park to the Zoo. We will eat lunch at 12.00 and then spend time looking around the zoo.We hope to arrive back at school at 4.30 pm. Childrens will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic ''Home sweet home''.
    THANK YOU
    Miss Henderson,Miss Garlick and Miss Hutton.

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  13. Reuben12 May 2014 at 10:21

    Dear Mrs Dye

    Year 4 would like your permission to go to London Zoo on Tuesday 20th May 2014 we will be travelling by train from Hainault Station and we will walk through Regent Park to the zoo .We will eat lunch at 12:00 and then spend time looking around the zoo . We hope to arrive back at school 4:00 pm . The children will really enjoy the day and it will help learn about our topic home sweet home .
    Thank you

    Miss Henderson , Miss Garlick , and Miss Hutton

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