Thursday, 12 December 2013

English homework due 17th December

Write a paragraph describing this picture. Think about everything we have learnt about using adjectives and connectives. Remember all the different sentence openers you could include to make your writing more interesting.

Why is the elephant on water ski's? Where is he going? Is he in a competition? What other animals could water ski?


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  1. Mevin13 December 2013 at 09:37

    An elephant is water skiing to an mystery land and he is trying to get there before the dog gets there. The dog can swim but the elephant can not.so he got water ski,s and is skiing but with a speed boat pulling the elephant and the elephant was faster then the dog that he got there first.

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  2. kemdia14 December 2013 at 07:59

    because he wants to act human he must be going to africa he must be in a competion with a panda maybe acheeatah

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  3. miruna 4G14 December 2013 at 08:40

    The elephant was going to see his friends.......!!! he had to go at..........the big forest. It was a long journey.but it fantistic journey and his fawnd his friends.The End

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  4. Ellie 4g14 December 2013 at 12:27

    His name is Jack. He is not in a competiton instead, Jack is playing with his friends at the beautiful, big beach. Unluckily it was a dark and damp day. Jack and his friends spotted a small deserted island not faraway from the beach. The island was sandy and there were palm trees but the sky, it was also dark and damp. But they also had fun.

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  5. Alexander15 December 2013 at 00:33

    As soon as the boat was due to leave, the elephant, giraffe and zebra jumped on the ski before the boat got away.The giraffe and zebra fell off the ski and left the elephant by himself.

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  6. teodora amarioarei 4G15 December 2013 at 03:16

    In a cloudy morning a completion was due on the ocean because the king of the jungle was celebrating his birthday. The completion was between the jungle animals so they needed to water ski until they get to the grey boat. The animals were: monkey leopard and the elephant. The first one to finish was the big elephant and the second one to finish was the leopard and the last one was the monkey.

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  7. Afi15 December 2013 at 03:22

    On a snowy day in England, there was a very big elephant on a water ski because it was taking part in a game with the other animals including a zebra, tiger and lion. This is how you play the game. an animal has to be on a snow ski and jump as far as they can. The animal who jumps the furthest gets a special prize. A very long pole is used to measure how far each animal jumps and it is recorded on a piece of paper. The elephant was in first position and received a gold medal and gold chocolate coins. The tiger came second and he got chocolate coins and a silver medal. The lion was in third place and got a bronze metal and also got chocolate coins. All the animals had a fun and a jolly good time.

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  8. Kajus Juocinskas Y4G15 December 2013 at 03:58

    The athletic elephant is on the water ski’s because he is in the competition for worlds most sporty animals in which the grand prize is 5 years worth of it’s favourite food.

    He is going to do 3 laps around the Bermuda Triangle and then grind just onto the sand where the judges will give him a score out of 15.

    Yes. He is in the competition for worlds most sporty animal.

    He is going against a King Cobra, a Squid, a Giraffe and finally a Squirrel.

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  9. Safiya Rakas15 December 2013 at 05:35

    The clever elephant found a way to ski so that it can go to the zoo and meets its brother's and sister's. He is trying to race the small, speeding boat to the zoo however the boat is to fast for him. Dogs and squirrels can also water ski.

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  10. Unknown15 December 2013 at 07:01

    This enormous elephant is water skiing to raise money for charity to save the animals.
    The other animals think he is a hero because he only wants 1 peanut.

    Aleisha Jordinson

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  11. Cosmina15 December 2013 at 10:43

    This huge elephant was trapped in a tiny, ugly cage. His zoo owner was looking for his courageous elephant. It took him three days to find his elephant and when he did, he took him out of the horrible cage. The zoo owner called his friends to come with a boat and water skis to take the elephant back to the zoo. The elephant was for the first time on water skis and he started off by being scared, but after a couple of minutes he started enjoying the water ski ride. Eventually the elephant arrived happily at the zoo.

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  12. Reuben15 December 2013 at 13:34

    This elephant is proving all jungle animals that elephants are not the fattest animal . He is doing that by not braking or sliping of the ski . He is also telling his son to start the boat .

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  13. sureka.s(Y4G)15 December 2013 at 14:29

    The vast elephant travelled around the sea by
    following a lighting speed boat. smoothly to an
    sweet country that takes care of animals such
    as elephants. which have been treated nicely or
    selfishly to them they do the best they can do .
    But that country is not like that because it takes
    care of many animals so that is there suitable
    country to live in so that were they are taking
    the poor elephant.

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