English Homework
Thursday 28th November 2013 to be done by Tuesday 3rd
December 2013
Can you up level these sentences?
Write them
below. Can you use any adjectives? Similes? Sentence Openers? Connectives?
Punctuation?
1) It is cold
outside.
2) The dog barked.
3) He was
scary.
4) He looked
at her.
5) They walked
down the street.
1."It is freezing outside"whispered John
ReplyDelete2. "What a noisy dog"shouted the old Granny
3.He was so scary that a cat ran away!
4. He stared at her.
5. They ran down the street madly!
1. It was cold like Antarctica outside.
ReplyDelete2. The vicious dog barked angrily at me.
3. I was scared when I looked at his face.
4. They stared at each other.
5. Walking dawn the long dark street was terrifying for them.
1 it is very misty and frozen outside .
ReplyDelete2 the terrifying dog barked at the innocent post man .
3 he was petrifying .
4 he looked at the playful girl .
5 they ran down the street .
It is cold, foggy and damp outside.
ReplyDeleteFuriously, the dog growled.
The big ugly man looked frightening.
The handsome man looked at the pretty lady.
The 2 best friends walked together down town.
It felt as cold as -100 degrees, in the freezing outside, during the frosty winter!
ReplyDeleteWhen the dog barked extremely loud, every dog in the country came to see him- at the speed of light!
He was as scary- as a dead body coming back to life, when all of a sudden more zombies started to revive!
He looked at her with such a mean gaze, as if he was going to try to murder her!
They walked down the street so carelessly, that they didn’t realise, a car was heading straight at them!
it is very cold outside
ReplyDeletethe loud dog barked
the man was scary
he stared at her in disgust
1) When I opened the window it was freezing cold outside.
ReplyDelete2) When I was walking down the street, suddenly my neighbour's vicious dog barked and i darted home.
3) He was scary as a scarecrow.
4) The boy raced past Molly on his bike and he looked at her in a suspicious way.
5) They walked down the street in their pyjamas to raise money for Children in need.
1) It was freezing cold outside in the windy day!
ReplyDelete2) The furry and hungry dog barked at his owner.
3) The viscous vampire was so scary I SCREEMED and the window was broken into pieces!
4) A boy was staring at a man tapping his feet at the train station differently .
5) The two men walk down the street with a little puppy called mossy!
1) It was so cold outside that the snow turned into shiny, glittery ice !
ReplyDelete2) As the butterfly came and sat on the dog's nose, the dog barked and leaped so the butterfly flew away.
3) He was as scary as a wolf with sharp teeth, a terrifying HOWL and orange spooky eyes!!!
4)He looked envious at her because the girl with big glasses, two hair bunches and freckles was smarter than he was.
5)The two trendy and chatty girls walked down the street to go shopping.
Aleisha Jordinson
ReplyDelete1.Its as cold as ice outside.
2.The big brown dog barked at me.
3.He was scary because it was dark .
4. He stared at her because she looked weird.
5.They walked slowly down the very long street.
1. It was frozen outside.
ReplyDelete2.The dog heard a car and barked.
3.He was terrify by that noise.
4.The dog looked at his mistress.
5.After the car pass they walked down the street to their house.
It was so so cold and i couldn't go outside:dogs were barking so loudly that even the powerful people should be scared.I was behind the blinds and looked at the window at the people who come and go on the street.Suddenly i saw a boy,he was dressed like he should come from a holoween party.Looked at the girl who was waiting the bus on the opposite side.He asked her if the bus will come soon,but her answer made him to join her and walked down the street till they arrive at the destination.
ReplyDelete1) It was as freezing as a refrigerator !!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete2) The aggravated dog barked madly .
3) He was as scary as a witch .
4) Although a person was talking to him he glanced at her .
5) They walked briskly down the street