The 100 word challenge
What
is the 100 word challenge?
A prompt is given, which can be a picture or a
series of individual words and the children can use up to 100 words to write a
creative piece. The word count is to encourage you to really think about which
words you are using and be super creative with your choices.
Give
it your best effort because your friends will be marking your homework and our quad blogging friends from around the world will also be
reading and commenting on our pieces of writing. Good luck!
This is your prompt...
…suddenly the pain in my arm…
An example of using this in your writing is below:
Dearest Abigail… I wrote in silence, the only noises joining me were the airy gusts of wind seeping through my tiny window. I ignored, eager to finish this unfulfilling letter. Suddenly the pain in my arm went from lightly aching to extreme shock and agonising torment. “I think I should take a well deserved rest…” I said aloud, whilst scrunching up the paper and tossing it with the others.
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ReplyDeleteHave you used the prompt "suddenly there was a pain in my arm?"
DeleteMinecraft(End)
ReplyDeleteSuddenly the pain in my arm was unbearable as the Endstone was draining my health.It made my job difficult to hit the crystals,so I could finally kill the Enderdragon without it regenerating his health.But what made it even harder was all the Enderman (Enderdragons slaves.)After five hours trying to hit the crystals I did it.After I did destroy him I was rewarded with tons of EXP,the answers to all my problems ,and finally credits to minecraft game,which take forever to load.
Well Done Kajus
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On a sunny Saturday afternoon, I was in the garden playing ball games with my friends. There were two teams. My brother and I were in one team and our two friends were in another team. Whoever catches the ball gets a point for their team and the winner is the team with the most points. While chasing the ball I tripped and landed on my arm. I quickly got up and tried to catch the ball because I was determined to win but suddenly the pain in my arm made it difficult to reach out and catch the ball.
DeleteWhat I like about this is it is very descriptive.I think you can explain what is Enderdragon and Enderman is
DeleteEnderdragon and Enderman are from a game. Search from google images for pictures if you want to find out what they are.
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ReplyDeleteThere was a girl called Lilly. She met a man called Charlie he always robber peoples houses and when he saw Lilly he asked her for any help and she said " yes " the man went to the wrong place that she asked to go to Pakistan. In stead of Pakistan he went too hypnotise land. Charlie dropped her off and went. Lilly thought she was in a another land. A another man called Jo came and kept on following her. Lilly asked why are you following me? She turned around and saw that his eyes where dark, flam red. He started to laughing ...
Have you used the prompt "suddenly there was a pain in my arm?"
Deletevery poetic Sureka, I really enjoyed your fantastic work. But just one thing, remember to use the prompt that you were given. I will give it a ***** 5 star rating! :)
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ReplyDeleteI was at the doctor to have an injection and suddenly the pain in my hand felt terrible. I screamed and the doctor puled the needle out. My mummy took me home and looked at my poor hand. She thought it was going to be fine, but the next day it got worse and it started bleeding. My mum took me to the hospital. The nurse put a bandage around my arm and she said I should have a calm day. My mum said it wouldn’t be long before taking the bandage off , so it was great news for me.
This is a very good piece of writing Cosmina! However when people are saying things you could use some speech marks.
DeleteThank you for your advice Kajus in my next homework I will use speech.
DeleteSuddenly the pain in my arm froze like a fish finger as snow storm blowing away. The weather was freezing cold and I knew that I was going to freeze to death.
ReplyDeleteEverything was white just white and I could hardly see anything but suddenly while I was walking my eyes were closing.
I had to keep on going or I will fail but I pulled myself together and while I was walking my legs were shaking but there was no where that I could have a rest.
I had to be brave and to carry on walking but I had collapsed. I fell to the ground and took my last breath, closed my eyes and died.
I like your creative similies! A very emotional piece of writing.
DeleteI did not know that I written similies
DeleteI liked your piece of writing it was really good to read your prompt
DeleteIn my house I wrote silently suddenly the pain in my arm grew strong I dropped my pen and stopped writing I took each breath slowly and calmly. I tried to pick up my pen but it fell on the floor tic it sound was as it touched the floor owwww I said. The pain grew more more more and more. Ooooooooooowwwww repeated again. I got on my feet slowly I reached out for my phone I dilled 999 and said ambulance please hollo its my arm it has sharp pain ok your coming now yeah. They took me to hospitle and I stayed there for21 days after I died.
ReplyDeleteSome good adverbs Ellie. Don't forget to think really carefully about your ending to build the best impact possible.
DeleteMy day began when I woke up with my right arm in the air. Was it a dream or was I a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle? My super sensitive ears started twitching and suddenly I heard whispering outside my bedroom door. Could they be alien invaders waiting to attack, or my parents talking quietly? My forehead is wet with tiny beads of sweat because super ninjutsu skills will have to be used for the first time. My bedroom door began to open slowly, "bang" I fell from my bunk bed and suddenly the pain in my right arm began hurting.
ReplyDeleteAlex, what a creative piece of writing! I love the rhetorical question!
DeleteSuddenly the pain in my arm where my dog bit me started ache and it felt like a freezing virus destroying my hand. The next thing I knew I saw hair on my arm then my body started to shake. I was turning into a fierce werewolf!
ReplyDeleteI looked around and I saw a doctor. I ran towards him and I shredded his clothes and ate him. After I ate the doctor I went to other peoples houses and ate them all. Suddenly I heard the screeching of cars. It was the police! I knew I had to get out of there fast.
Well done Mevin! Very creative.
DeleteWhen ever i play on my bike or when i play on my trampoline. Even when I'm in my lovely Cosey warm bed something isn't right. Suddenly i get a pain in my arm which lasts for a long while. So the next day i go to the doctors he sends me for a x-ray. Then i get told that my arm is broken, I could not believe it at all. When me and my mum came home to show my brother my impressive plaster he laughed so much he fell of his chair and hurt his arm, how funny.
ReplyDeleteYou have thought carefully about your word choices Safiya. Don't forget to sustain your tenses- are you writing in the present tense, or the past? Think carefully.
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ReplyDeleteI'M JUST A LITTLE GIRL AND HAVE WISHES AND DREAMS ALSO HOPES.I HOPE THAT ONE DAY BE ABLE TO HAVE MANY TRUE FRIENDS WHO CAN HELP ME AND GUIDE ME.I WANT TO FEEL THAT I'M NOT ALONE HERE AND SOONER ON LATER TO BE PART OF THIS COUNTRY.I'M JUST 8 AND I WANT TO BE A WELL KNOWN PAINTER TO BECOME TRUE.I WANT MY DOLLS AND MY TOYS, WANT TO PLAY AND ENJOY MY CHILDHOOD AND WHEN I SEE A CHILD WHO NEED ME OR MY HELP TO BE ABLE TO DO SOMETHING FOR HIM/HER.
Very poetic Teodora! Did you use the prompt?
DeleteDear diary
ReplyDeleteToday I went to the circus and met a magician. He told the audience he was going to do a magic trick on me, he said “this trick won’t hurt” he whispered and then got out a wooden spoon; hit my arm it hurt for a little bit. When I went home suddenly the pain in my arm started to flow up and down. When I got home I had green grapes for snack they were so sour, I felt so tired and I sat down to watch some television. Dinner worst I thought today was my unlucky day.
An interesting piece of writing Nokuthula! You have used great writing techniques, speech marks, sentence openers, semi-colons etc. Well done.
DeleteI like your work
DeleteI was enjoying watching tv, but of all of a sudden my arm was stiff and paining. I fell to the floor cring, my mum appeared in the living room where i was screaming in desprate pain, "aaaahh! i need to get you to hospital or it will get worse!!!" my mum pleaded if i was okay. so she
ReplyDeletedailed 999, so all the ambulance and police came driving
MADLY! So they asked what happened, as i was listening about their conversation i felt so sorry for myself. In 20 weeks time i had been treated cautiously and luckly, I REGIANED MY HEALTH!
Excellent word choices Alizay!
DeleteSuddenly the pain in my arm moved as fast as a fiery flame .When it came to the tip of my finger it really pained .When I groaned it hurted more and more and even more .I went to the doctor . The doctor said the only cure is to have an injection .My jaw dropped .
ReplyDeleteThe next day I relaxed my garden .My telephone started to ring . I went in my house . I picked the telephone . It was the doctor .I put the phone down and I knew what was happening.I went to the hospital . I was nervous . The doctor took the needle out of its case .
I stared at the tip of the needle .The doctor pushed the needle in .
"Ahh that`s better " I say .
I go back home happily .
BY REUBEN
Reuben, an interesting piece of writing.
DeleteBe careful with your tenses... are you writing in present or past tense? Make sure you keep it the same throughout!
Reuben I like the way you described the pain in your arm
DeleteDear dairy
ReplyDeleteToday is a fabulous day for me , because it is my very first time to start my tennis club.I am highly exuberant as I have been longing for the last 1 year .It was a significant recreation along with my trainer. When I came back home I suddenly felt extremely severe pain in my arm. I drank a cool cup of tea and had a warm shower. Which made me very comfortable.My dad and me decided to buy the tennis racket ,net and finally the balls.One day we went to the park and played tennis.It was thrilling but I found that my dad had won & I had lost the game but played two more match's.This time the pain in my arm was much better.
Much better Akhil. Well done!
DeleteWhat a cool paragraph Akhil!
DeleteToday is a great for me because I got a new comic and a new computer game.Then I was playing on computer then I lose three times.Then I was going up stairs to read a comic "suddenly" its started to pain in my arm I tell to my mum.Then my mum take me to hospital the doctor said I need medicine.Then I drink the medicine and now I feeling better.
ReplyDeleteWell done Harshil! Don't forget your adjectives and adverbs too.
DeleteDear Diary
ReplyDeleteI am doing my gymnastics but suddenly BANG!!!!! I get a huge pain in my arm I screamed and howled until my coach came running they called my mum and 999 my mum then arrived 5 minutes later when i got to the hospital they gave me a cast.I had it for 6 WEEKS !!!!!!! when i heard that i screamed even louder.They gave me medicine and said i should rest in bed.When the 6 weeks were up I could go back to gymnastics and school and see my friends but then i fell over and bumped my head
Great Kemdia! You have worked hard. Think about the way you finished your writing- is it an ending?
ReplyDeletewe liked the way you put speech marks you could enprove your ending a little bit
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